Precious Time (Tanka)

Cherry blossom bursts
Into unrivalled pink pools
Like so much shed skin
A cyclical renewing
But one day I fear it won’t

10 thoughts on “Precious Time (Tanka)

      1. I love writing the tanka. The tanka chain is the only way I’ve ever co-written with anyone. I find they help me to compress images, ideas, and feelings better than any other form. Be reading again on Sunday – see you then 🙂

      2. Oh, sorry. I ignored the rude remark (I really need to stop doing that). I meant to respond to ‘Thanks. It made a nice change.’

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