Six Word Stories: Long-term Thinking

Bought a cactus. She wanted roses.

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16 thoughts on “Six Word Stories: Long-term Thinking

  1. Good story, valid point. How attached are you to the verb “Bought” though? It may be too passive for this situation. The story may work better with “Stole”, “Fetched”, or “Raised” as the first word. All the better to highlight the active, yet doomed, wooing of a maiden.

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