50 Word Stories: The Second Coming

We swept into the garden of no return like the spring tide, a relentless wave of humanity. Elliot had taken my hand and asked if this was Eden like the one taught in Sunday School. Better, I’d said. Why? he’d pressed. I smiled, “Because this time God wants us here.”


11 thoughts on “50 Word Stories: The Second Coming

  1. Wow, I just got chills. I loved this as I have found that it’s so much harder to put something together with less word count. That’s the beauty of Twitter, teaching us how to get to the point and tell a story with poetic triumph. ❤

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