50 Word Stories: Jazzed


There's jazz playing. I hate jazz. My face gives me away.
"Not a jazz fan, huh?"
"No."
He ignores my abrupt reply.
"It's more than music, man, it's a feelin'".
"I'm not feeling it."
"Coz yer eyes are open, man. Close 'em. S'like love."
I do. He's right. It is.

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6 thoughts on “50 Word Stories: Jazzed

  1. There’s a saying, “If I had more time, I’d have written a shorter letter.” Writing effectively with just a few words is a special challenge, but this scene comes to life nicely. ^^

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