Have / Have Not

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Authors Note: Just a little sample from a work in progress.

"I have seen the stars and the wonders of a billion, billion galaxies. I have seen the birth of beginnings and the death of the end, the two forces that control us in their endless dance. In that place where light and darkness sweep each other away in opposing comforts, I have seen that which no other can imagine. Yet, in all of these miracles and more, I have never seen such as you. I have are two words spoken with ease, two I have used too readily, but until you, my love, I have never known have not."

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9 thoughts on “Have / Have Not

  1. Very nice writing. Beginnings and endings. And the beginning of the story is presented in your last sentence. Just when I thought I’d got away, I’m glued. You begin by sending the reader into the vastness and draw himher (my word) right back to the individual. Yes, very nice writing. ๐Ÿ™‚

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